+Critique My Art

Please provide:

- your name

- level of skill

- & perhaps what you were aiming for?

The goal of this thread is to help you improve on your work in your area of skills. You may ask others to rate your results on a scale of 1-10 and have them critique the work for you.

 

Example:

Name: Jenny Shoebox

Level of skill: Beginner (noob)

I was aiming for a really vibrant blue that would catch attention. Perhaps a polished, tranquil kind of look?

 

Answer:

I rate it 4 on a scale of 1-10. I like the way you cropped the picture, but I felt that the coloring was a bit over the top. The background is a bit too blue compared to her yellow-ish skin. I felt as though it was a bit too dirty compared to the background. Maybe you could try brightening up the image some more next time.

 

 

 

Haha, no worries. No feelings were hurt in this critique. After all, I was just playing pretend with myself. Now, you don’t have to be as harsh as I was in this critique. This isn’t a thread to bash on others’ works. It’s to help others improve. Please also provide detailed critiques. Don't just say, "it's good!" and then ask for a critique of your own.

I will start off by providing one of my results for you guys to critique:

 

^this was made almost half a year ago, I believe.

 

PS:

Yes, I love Mika Nakashima.

Edited by Annana, 2 year(s) ago

lemme be the first to comment? xD lol. it's nice, but i have a problem with the focus. mika is supposed to be the center of attention right? well, there are many things that side track you from that, like when i look at it, my view goes straight to the whitish area rather than here. . .and i find the mika nakashima text too bold/grudgy. but overall, i really like the piece dear. =]

Looks good. :p